As I sit here at my desk, trying to figure out how to write a brilliant essay to be better recognized throughout this application process, I have come to realize that this is what life is about.
We are all given a blank sheet in the beginning. What we choose to put on this blank sheet determines our outcome. The life experiences that have “filled my pages” have shaped me into who I am today. My endurance of difficult times and my willingness to persevere in the face of obstacles makes me unique.
I come from a single parent home. My parents have been divorced since I was two years old. My father stepped in when he had to throughout my childhood, but it was my mother who raised me.
I remember numerous days living in one room, wondering “How long life will be like this?” and “Why does everyone else have a completed family and living in one area?”. All while my mother and I moved to numerous locations in an attempt to survive in the face of divorce.
During this time, I attended an elementary school where I was placed in a special education program. Teachers and rest of the staff told my mother that I had a learning disability and my knowledge capacity was limited. She never believed them. My mother believed that I was capable of doing anything. She never gave up on me. She believed in me.
As soon as I was given an opportunity in the main stream I never looked back. I set out to prove those who doubted me wrong with every chance I was given. And now, I am able to say that I will be a college graduate in six months. It is both a personal triumph as well as for my family.
When I first entered the University setting after community college I had a rough time at first. It was my first time being away from home. Additionally, there were many family issues occurring at the time. As such, my marks did not reflect my full potential. But as my transcript shows, my grades steadily improved every semester and will continue to do so on a graduate level if allowed to continue.
I have a diverse ethnic background. This enables an understanding my part regarding the social issues that are so pertinent today. I am part El Salvadorian and part Irish. The community that I am from on Long Island, New York, was extremely diverse and full of people from different social classes. Having many diverse groups in one community paves the way for discrimination, which I unfortunately experienced in my childhood. However, because of my background, I have a much needed perspective. I have a deep understanding of discrimination as well as an interest in learning more about racism and how it has developed. I am hoping to work with families of different ethnic backgrounds because I feel my past experiences and my college education have helped me to understand the challenges that minorities face, and a great understanding of how a culture affects a way of life along with family values.
I am also extremely family oriented. I utilized these skills during the difficult times of my own childhood when they were desperately needed. Divorce is a family issue. I want to extend help to families in similar situations.
I believe I am right for the Counseling/Psychology field. I believe that my life experiences have given me the compassion needed. I am passionate to help people. I know I can make a difference if given the chance.
Syracuse University is clearly the place to start. The “Family and Marriage Therapy Program” at Syracuse University will help me to pursue my dream. I know this is a great institution full of great faculty that will provide me the tools I need to pursue such a career. As this Marriage Family and Marriage Therapy Program” is recognized as a culturally sensitive therapy, there is a great connection between what is offered and what I would like to accomplish with my education and career. My overall goal is to pursue a PhD after completing the Master Program. I hope to one day open my own Psychology practice.
I know if given the chance I can achieve much and help many.
All I need is for someone to believe. I won't let you down.
|Sample Graduate School Admissions Essay 3|
(Master’s in Counseling)
Life can be so shallow and unrewarding if you are living each day with no plan for the future and little thought toward helping others. This may seem like an obvious statement, but I come across people every day who haven’t had the opportunity to realize this truth for themselves just yet, and they are miserable because of it. I feel very fortunate that the goals I have formed for myself over the past few years are helping me make the most of every opportunity that presents itself, allowing me to live a life with true meaning. My mother has always been my inspiration, not only to go for my dreams, but to make sure that my dreams and goals will benefit others and not just me. I have seen a glimpse of the kind of future I am aiming for in my current position assisting a psychologist, and also during my internships in college and my time working as a counselor for a residential substance abuse program in a prison. With the body of experience I have built up during my undergraduate studies and afterward, I see a career for myself in psychology or counseling, and I know that I have to earn a firm educational background upon which to build my future practice.
I have a solid academic track record thus far, and have every expectation of improving upon my past performance now that I have found my niche and am ready to dedicate my full attention to becoming the most well prepared counselor I can be. I know that I have chosen a field that can be emotionally difficult as well as physically draining, but after working with the types of difficult cases I saw in prison, I know that I have the strength and compassion to stand up to the challenge of a lifetime of listening to other peoples’ tragedies. Knowing that after I earn the credentials and training to go along with my compassionate nature I will be able to make a lasting and positive impact on my clients’ lives, and the lives of those around them, fills me with a true sense of purpose and intense eagerness to begin on the long path of learning that lies before me.
It is my plan in this next educational step to increase my awareness of psychotherapy practices, refine my knowledge of disorders, symptoms, and effective treatments, improve my listening and interviewing skills, and generally enhance my ability to work effectively as a professional in this field. As it is my long term goal to continue on to earn a Doctorate in Psychology, any school I attend can be doubly assured that I will strive to achieve the highest level of academic success possible as my performance there will directly affect my future academic goals.
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